2011北洋教育中考13、14分作文
2011-6-14
中考作文流程：
一． 审题：根据文章的叙述，找出其中的要求，用线划出：
1. 还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?某英文报纸正在以“An unforgettable experience”为题进
行征文活动。请你写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感想。
参考词语：remember, help, wonderful, feel, think
An Unforgettable Experience
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences.
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2. 在我们小时候，父母和老师就告诉我们要对别人有礼貌，你是如何做的呢?请举出三个以上的例子，并谈
谈你对有关讲礼貌的看法和建议。
提示词语：young, tell, polite, for example, think
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二． 组织文章框架：
例如：一件难忘的事情：
1. 扣住文章中心，指明有一件事是自己难忘的； 2. 对这件事情的必要叙述； 3. 这件事为什么使你难忘。
对别人礼貌：
1. 指出从小父母要求我们对别人礼貌；
2. 自己是如何做到的，三个事例___________________ __________________ ______________ 3. 对讲礼貌的看法：important & necessary
建议：大家都要对别人讲礼貌。
三． 行文：
1. 选择时态：有的文章就是一个时态，一般是“一般现在时”；
有的文章是两个时态：回忆性的是由“一般现在时”过度到“一般过去时”，必要的时候在文章
结尾，还会再次回到“一般现在时”；计划性的文章则是由“一般现在时”过度到“一般将来时”，必要的时候在文章结尾，还会再次回到“一般现在时”。 2. 谋划开篇：开篇要开门见山，迅速进入主题；
3. 文章主体：巧妙使用从句：宾语从句，定语从句，状语从句，表语从句，同位语从句；
巧妙使用句型：具体内容回忆“完成句子”； 4. 有力的结尾：结尾要干脆，有力。
四． 举例说明：
1. Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks.
While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.
From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.
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Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget my first volunteer work.
Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. First, we gave away some books and stationery to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.
By doing the volunteer work, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience that giving is receiving.
2. Our parents and teachers told us to be polite to others when we were very young. Now I am doing
things as they tell me. For example, I always wait in line while doing shopping and give my seat to the old on the bus. I never forget to greet teachers when I meet them in or out of the school. And I also say the words “Thank you” “Sorry” and “You’re welcome” to others whenever necessary.
In my opinion, politeness is very important to us all because it can help us not only get on very well with each other, but also make the society better and warmer, especially in the year of 2008, when the 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. So I strongly suggest that we all should be polite to each other.
五． 作文练习：
现在，学校正在开展题为What I have done for my class 的征文活动，请你投搞，谈谈你为班集体做了些什么，有什么感想或受到了哪些教育。 提示词语：love, class, do, for example, think
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I love my class because it’s just like a big family. We should do what we can do to make it better.
I have done many things for my “family”. For example, my classmates threw away the empty bottles after drinking the water last month. In my opinion, it’s not only a waste of money, but also makes the room very dirty, so I collected them in a box and sold them with my classmates, and then we bought some useful things for our “family”, such as mops, basins, dustbins as well as some flowers to decorate the classroom.
I think we should do something for our big “family” though we are very busy learning. The more we do for it, the better our class will be.
六． 中考作文经典句型：
1. 据说… It is said (that)从句
据报导… It is reported (that)从句
大家都知道… It is known (that)从句 一般认为… It is thought (that)从 句
据估计… It is estimated (that)从句
一般预料… It is expected (that)从句 一般相信… It is believed (that)从句
1、 It’s reported that some nuclear radiation from Fukushima of Japan has gone into the sea.
据报道，部分日本福岛核辐射已经进入海洋。
2、It's known that Chongqing is a mount city. 众所周知，重庆是座山城。
2. The + 比较级 +（名词） 主语 +谓语， the + 比较级 + （名词）主语+谓语 越……，就越……
1、The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你越努力，你进步越大。
2、The more books we read, the more learned （有学问的）we become. 我们书读得越多，我们就越有学问。 3、The more exercise you take, the healthier you’ll be ! 锻炼越多，你越健康！ 4、The more you eat, you will be! 你吃得越多，长得越胖。
3. A be the 最高级+ 名词 +(that)+ B + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) A是B所见过（知道、听说、遇到、看过……）最……的……。 例：
1、Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen. 姚明是我所看过的最高的篮球运动员。 2、 Miss Gao is the kindest teacher that I have ever heard of . 张老师是我曾经听说过的最仁慈的教师。 3、Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever known.刘翔是我所了解的最勤奋的运动员。 4.Nothing is 比较级 than to do something. 没有什么比……更……。（……是最……的事）。例： 1、Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有什么是比接受教育更重要的事。（接受教育是最重要的事。） 2、Nothing is more important than to protect our environment. 没有什么是比环保更重要的事。(保护环境是最重要的事)
3、Nothing is more important than to gain（get） knowledge.
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没有什么是比学习知识更重要的事。(学习是最重要的事。) 4、Nothing is more difficult than to change a man’s views.
没有什么比改变一个人的观念更难的了。（改变一个人的观念是最难的事。） 5. There is no denying that 从句。 不可否认的…… 例：
1、There is no denying that the qualities of their living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，他们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
2、There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen. 不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。
6. It is universally acknowledged that 从句。 全世界都知道…… 例： 1、It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
2、It’s universally acknowledged that nothing is more important than to gain knowledge. 全世界都知道学习知识是最重要的事。
7. There is no doubt that 从句。 毫无疑问的……
例：There is no doubt that to plant more trees is good for protecting the environment . 毫无疑问多种树对保护环境有益。
8. An advantage of …is that 从句。 ……的优点是……
例：An advantage of taking exercise is that it can make us keep healthy. 锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。
9. The reason why 从句is that +从句 ……的原因是……
例：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
10. So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 如此……以致于…… 例：
1、So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。 2、So beautiful is Xi Shi that we all like her. 11. By +V-ing, … can … ……，……能够…… 例： 1、By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 2、By reading, we can broaden our horizon. 12. Those who … ……的人……
例：Those who break the law should be punished. 违法的人应该受处罚。 13. There is no one but …. 没有人不…… 例：
1、There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。
通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。
西施是如此美丽，以致于我们都喜欢她。
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2、There is no one but longs to be a millionaire. 没有人不渴望成为百万富翁。 14. That is the reason why ….. 那就是……的原因。 例： 1、Summer is hot. That is the reason why I don't like it.
夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 冬天很冷。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
2、Winter is cold. That is the reason why I don't like it.
15. During/In the past + 时间，S + 现在完成时 . 过去……年来，……一直…… 。 例： During the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
16. spare no effort to do something 不遗余力地干某事 例： 1、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 2、I will spare no effort to improve my English.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 我要不遗余力地提高英语。
17. Due to/Thanks to +v-ing 因为（对亏）……，才…… 例： 1、Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励，我才终于实现我的梦想。
2、Thanks to Miss Wang 's help, I passed the final-term examination. 多亏王老师的帮助，我通过了期末考试。 18. What a + adj + n. + 主语+ 谓语! = How + adj + a /an + n. +主语+谓语 ! 多么……! 例： 1、What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事! 2、What an important thing it is to be honest!
How important a thing is to be honest! 诚实是多么重要的事! 19. have a great influence on ~~ (对……有很大的影响) 例： 1、Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
2、Watching TV too much has a great influence on our study. 看电视太多对我们学习有很大的影响。 20. do good to (对...有益)，do harm to (对……有害) 例： 1、 Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。 2、 Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
21. In my opinion= As far as I am concerned that 从句 就我的看法…;我认为…
例：In my opinion, playing computer games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health. 就我的看法玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。
22. Of all the people I know，perhaps none deserves my respect more than …
在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比…更值得我尊敬。
例： Of all the people I know，perhaps none deserves my respect more than Miss Wang, my English teacher.
在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比我的英文老师王老师更值得我尊敬。
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